[DungeonMaster]

Nonsense. While it's true that the theory of evolution, like all fields of science, studies and describes natural processes (i.e., how things behave when they're not being screwed with)

By jove you've almost got it! If you had just stopped right here.

[Dimensio]

If you had just stopped right here.

I believe that you neglected to complete this sentence by explaining the hypothetical outcome of Ichneumon's stopping his setence prematurely. I did observe, however, that ending Ichneumon's sentence at the point that you directed would have made it as equally incomplete as your own sentence fragment, as Ichneumon's sentence opened with "while" and described a true statement, your editing cuts it short prior to the condition for which the "While" was used. Without that section of the sentence, the "while" makes no sense.