To: sultan88
I probably need to tweak it, I put it together pretty fast. Or is it OK like it is?
CG
626 posted on
03/09/2004 1:57:15 PM PST by
Conspiracy Guy
(Of course I'm armed. Isn't everyone?)
To: Conspiracy Guy
It's great as is. If I did it I would have used "Ketchup" instead of "pickles".
635 posted on
03/09/2004 2:20:36 PM PST by
sultan88
("I went down Virginia, seeking shelter from the storm...")
To: Conspiracy Guy
Second stanza, second line - put an "an" before "ass".
642 posted on
03/09/2004 2:26:54 PM PST by
sultan88
("I went down Virginia, seeking shelter from the storm...")
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