LOL. No, darn it. I've not done a good job if I have to explain. There's really no pillow here.
Now I don't care for poetry that I can't understand what they are talking about and now here I am writing it. Arrrgghh!
Thank goodness it's not my day job. ;)
Yours is quite good Darkchylde and your young so you should keep it up. Obviously there is writing talent that runs in your family.