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To: JenB

Jaundice or PPHN might do it.


5,554 posted on 10/25/2007 6:44:13 PM PDT by Lil'freeper (Don't taze me, bro!)
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To: Lil'freeper

Jaundice might work nicely! Thanks.

Ack, now I realize that the middle bit is way too short. Like two chapters. So I’ve got Event Set A, a four year gap, small Event Set B, a fourteen year “time passes” bit, and then Event Set C. But I think it’ll be clunky with a short piece of story surrounded by two time lapses.

And that’s the only way it works, since Event Set B involved characters that meet in Set A being married and having a kid, and the events in B are far too important to take place off screen.


5,570 posted on 10/25/2007 8:38:55 PM PDT by JenB
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