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To: JustAmy

You know...I do believe that Bob is rapidly becoming my favorite poet. He has at least a 5 point lead over the next most favorite.


90 posted on 10/30/2004 10:19:28 AM PDT by al_possum39
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To: al_possum39; JustAmy; Alamo-Girl
Thanks, Al,

I do it because I enjoy it, and sharing makes it even more fun.

It varies in quality. Here's how I feel about that...

The Wordwright

“A natural at rhyming,” they said with quiet awe,
As if the effort of the work was just a lucky draw.
The poet grimly sets to task and nails the fabric down.
He stretches it to smooth it; portrays a bit of frown.

The subject matter fights him. He struggles on despite,
And witnesses remark there seems no effort in this wright.
While storms torment his vision, and tempests on him pour,
He delicately sets a bit of shell upon the shore.

The setting must be balanced. He knows it must be so,
But others only notice as the vistas slowly grow.
His struggle is exhausting, and soon to bed must he,
But not before he finishes his latest travesty.

So tempted to destroy it, his stare a rueful stance,
He shrugs and turns away from it without a backward glance.
“Another masterpiece,” they cry, and celebrate each rhyme,
And tearfully, he vows that he will do it right next time.

NicknamedBob . . . . . . . . . . . October 25, 2004

99 posted on 10/30/2004 11:45:39 AM PDT by NicknamedBob (My first book is out! -- You may need gloves... AuthorHouse.Com/BookStore, look for Hawthorne.)
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