You made some mistakes in your sentence. "Leave" is spelled "L-e-a-ve", not "g-i-v-e", "me" should be "my" and "your" should be omitted."
Here is how the sentence would read if you had formulated it correctly.
"So if I ask you politely to leave my house, would you do it?"
The answer is that any rational person would. Nobody would stay in someone's house when they are an unwanted guest.
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Hmmm, the sentence looks correct and accurate to me, your opinion to the contrary notwithstanding.