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To: patriciaruth
Yes, you're right, a lot of the "wandering in the wilderness" can be passed over or cut out... but I rather liked reading it, too. It was sort of fascinating reading it and waiting for something to happen... watching the characters relationships gradually fray until it all blew up with Ron leaving.
282 posted on 07/22/2007 9:06:22 PM PDT by Bear_in_RoseBear (Loot it while it lasts)
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To: Bear_in_RoseBear
Wandering in the Wilderness

Wow! That's insightful!!

284 posted on 07/22/2007 9:07:42 PM PDT by patriciaruth (http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-news/1562436/posts)
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