To: proud American in Canada; All
Thanks for the intro my proud American friend. This is a great thread. Thanks for "pinging" me, I guess that is what you all call it around here. I'm still getting used to the format.
Since this is a poetry thread and I a poet, I suppose I should post something. Unfortunately, I have not the time to create a new composition for this occasion, so I will post one I composed as a commentary about how disconnected from each other we have become in society. I will follow it with one that should give you all some insight into who I am, at least if you pay attention... There are so many great poems and thoughts on this thread it is hard to find time to do them justice...
EXCUSES
Dont have time.
Dont care.
Its not my fault.
I didnt make this problem.
You can take care of it.
That is what I pay taxes for.
I dont have anything in common.
Theyre too old.
Theyre too young.
They wont like me.
I have the wrong color skin.
They do.
Im too tired.
They dont want my help.
Im not good enough to help.
Got to go eat.
I give to my church.
Their family should do it.
Its too cold.
No one ever helped me why should I?
Im not sure where to start.
Shes ugly.
Hes too fat.
They belong to another church.
They wont appreciate it anyway.
Theyre rich, they dont need it.
Theyre poor, they will just waste it like
everything else anyway.
EXCUSES, EXCUSES, EXCUSES
Tired of excuses yet?
So am I.
YOURS
Please don't anyone think that is directed at you specifically. I don't know any of you well enough to know if you make excuses or not. It is just something to think about.
Fragile
A man? A boy? Who knows?
Wealthy? Not in any measurable way
Attractive? More than some, less than others
Gifted? This poem doesnt even rhyme
Intelligent? Moderately I suppose
Knowledgeable? About largely useless things
Worthy? Not more than any other
What do I have to offer?
From what riches can I give?
I have acquired little in the life that I have lived
I offer what I have
And hope that its enough
My soul, my heart, my love
This is my offer, this is my gift
Hold it with care, for if it came in a box
It would be marked
FRAGILE
Okay, I'm doen for now. Thanks for opening this thread up, Amy. :)
246 posted on
09/22/2003 10:49:47 AM PDT by
Xfan
To: Xfan
Those are great! :) Welcome to FR and this thread!
263 posted on
09/22/2003 11:22:54 AM PDT by
MistyCA
(For some...it's always going to be "A Nam Thing!")
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