Good proposal. But I have issue with item 7.
Non-citizens who attempt to vote are committing an act of war against these United States and should be treated accordingly. (citizens who enable such an attack are committing treason) Either life in prison at some off shore facility (GITMO) or execution. Deporting them just lets them try again and encourages others to attack us.
We need to make the world fear us again.
We can work up to that if needed, personally, I prefer the minimum amount to force needed to accomplish a goal.