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To: Principled
I hope it didn't lose any sharpness in the redo. Does it read and sound better without the comma? I wavered on it.


11 posted on 02/02/2013 7:21:23 AM PST by Travis McGee (www.EnemiesForeignAndDomestic.com)
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To: Travis McGee

That’s better. It’s too short a sentence for a comma.


12 posted on 02/02/2013 8:19:55 AM PST by Atlantan
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To: Travis McGee

Dang Travis - !

I didn’t know that was you LOL

If you like a pause right where the comma was, try ellipses... or a dash -

You do good work!


16 posted on 02/02/2013 1:22:28 PM PST by Principled
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