Posted on 04/11/2024 7:47:47 PM PDT by Nextrush
A billionaire Vietnamese property owner sentenced to death...
What is lacking in it?
<>sentenced...the name of the person
<>sentenced...by whom
<>sentenced...WHY??
A thought: instead of taking your time to paraphrase the news item, maybe just copy the best headline you can find for that item. For example, the following headline tells who, by whom, and why, and even includes a colon!
Vietnam Sentences Real Estate Tycoon Truong My Lan To Death In Its Largest-Ever Fraud Case: Massive Fraud Amounting To 3% Of GDP
"A conversation tonight between US Defense Secretary Lloyd Austin and..."
and WHO?? this could be important!
* and I only had a criticism for 2 out of 18. Not bad.
Your article title does seem to run all together though, being several headlines combined into one title.
After the word “Thursday” maybe you could insert a keyboard symbol — a character like this ●
Then create a break between each headline in the title to make it a little easier to read. A dash or double dash could work there.
I was referring to the second “Thursday” in the article title.
Thank You I have space for 255 characters in the title area so economy of words.
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