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To: shortstop
I despise Lonsberry's writing style.

I immediately recognized it, and check, and yep, it's Bob. I was a native Rochesterian, and he's better on the radio. His message, when he is writing, is still stellar.

But his style sucks.

Because he writes like this.

In short sentence fragments.

Which mostly annoys me.

A lot.

24 posted on 12/11/2012 7:20:43 AM PST by Lazamataz (LAZ'S LAW: As an argument with liberals goes on, the probability of being called racist approaches 1)
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To: Lazamataz
I'm sorry.

To hear that.

I didn't know.

I'll try to avoid it.

In the future.

;^)

28 posted on 12/11/2012 7:46:04 AM PST by Teacher317 ('Tis time to fear when tyrants seem to kiss.)
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To: Lazamataz

Too funny..

He demonstrates part of the problem...

Short quick sound bite sentences, make it more palatable for his readers, which have short attention spans.

Me thinks the Japanese and Asian communities, in general, do not fit into his thesis. Abundance of self esteem does not seem to be part of their value system.

In general, I do agree with him..

I like this short sentence thingie do-bob..Cool !


31 posted on 12/11/2012 7:57:19 AM PST by Chuzzlewit
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